smiling crazily, reacting lazily. lying eyes materialize. words of comfort, chants loudly proclaiming you can’t hide…..


2 responses to “right now”

  1. What a striking set of lines—there’s a vivid, almost hypnotic rhythm in them that immediately pulls the reader into a mood that feels both mysterious and emotionally charged. The contrast between “smiling crazily” and “reacting lazily” creates a fascinating tension, as if the speaker is caught between outward expression and inward stillness. Phrases like “lying eyes materialize” and “chants loudly proclaiming you can’t hide” add a haunting, poetic intensity that lingers in the mind long after reading.

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