freight train memories, lost living. under the bridge, gathering. hopeless, homeless. scratching for everything. lost souls, banded together, waiting. searching for any little piece of dignity…………..
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There’s something deeply raw and haunting about this piece. 🌑
The fragmented rhythm works beautifully because it mirrors the instability and exhaustion of the lives being described. Phrases like “freight train memories” and “scratching for everything” carry such heavy imagery with very few words, which gives the writing a quiet but powerful emotional weight.
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thank you so very much..I can’t express enough!
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